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I agree with aleciarobbins you sort of need to work on a description of what the game is about. I can tell you are still learning the engine because there is a problem with the text running off and some places have the wrong triggers such as in the beginning with the paper cup it will pick up me interacting with it even if I'm actually by the armors, the hidden doors are also something that should be avoided, although it makes sense now a days to have a house front door across from the other if the player can't see a door then it's possible they won't find the door also a lot of clipping assets. Overall, it was alright for a lighthearted adventure

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Thank you for your feedback.

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Can you actually write what this game is about?  What type of content it has?  Is it complete or ongoing?  What is the version number?  I'd like to know these things before deciding to download a game or not.

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The game is a story focused RPG with some turn based combat . It is playable start to finish. I’m currently working on some grammar and spelling issues and I hope to release the final version soon as well as a sequel.

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What we mean by a description is what the game is about; "A story Focused RPG" does not tell us anything: who is the main character, what do they want, why are they fighting, you have it listed as an erotic game, what does it include...

there is a lot you might need to talk about.

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I have updated the game's story description, I apologize for any misunderstanding I am new to game development.